I decided to incorporate further influence from my trailer as I felt that it was lacking meaning and relation to my other products. I am still unsure on the image in her pupil, I have reduce the opacity to make it look more realistic to an actual reflection in a person's eye but I feel that it is unclear as to what it is when the image is zoom out to its normal dimensions.
"The main title text could be a little larger as it can become lost in the picture. If you set a small black line around the text it can make it stand out more."
Due to the fact that the current outcome of my trailer lacked the 'fear factor', I decided to incorporate some new shots into my trailer. I filmed my two main characters under different lighting to flash up throughout my trailer to increase the tension and make more of an impact on my audience. I then decided to introduce the weapon that would be present in my theoretical full length feature. I took inspiration from one of my fellow peers filming technique and they took inspiration from Alfred Hitchcock's film noir style. It also adds to the overall narrative of my trailer, instead of it just being visually pleasing.
