Because my trailer was lacking tension and fear, which is often a given in horror trailers, I decided to incorporate some fear into my trailer. I didn't want it to be too obvious so I used an overlay method to put in a silhouette of the 'fear' i my trailer which is the 'thing' that Flick talks to. The silhouette that I have used at the minute is just a a mysterious looking figure from google images, however I will be drawing my own version to put in shortly. I just wanted to see if it would work before I spent the time making my own. I have now put in my 'knife scene' which wasn't originally planned in my first storyboards, however again my trailer was lacking the tension that a horror trailer should give and it was too 'artsy' to be a horror, it was more leaning towards a thriller. The final big change that I have made to my trailer it the music, I spent may weeks try to figure about why I couldn't increase the tension or speed of my trailer and then I realised that it was the music. I have now removed the majority of the track 'Secret' and replaced it with some royalty free tension building horror music. I feel it has made a massive impact on my trailer and it has made it come together a lot more. It has also enabled me to add in some different sound effects that previously didn't work with the orginal music choice that I had.
My current draft of my film trailer is coming together quite nicely. However, it is still lacking on the pace, tension and 'fear factor'. To make me trailer have more impact on the viewer, I will need to organise and plan more filming. This extra filming will contain jump scares from close ups of my characters faces and added sounds effects. I will also include a visual hint at the 'fear' within my narrative.
Since added my timelapse I have decided to make a rather drastic change to my story. I felt as if my trailer wasn't telling a story or showing 'what could happen' so I implemented a change into the ending of my 'story' to give my trailer more structure and flow. My trailer now has a beginning, middle and end to represent different elements of the story that my actually film would have. I will be filmed this short clip as soon as possible and adding it to my trailer in the gap that is left after my timelapse then running the title of my film to close my trailer. The last part of my trailer will be the release date for Halloween 2016 at midnight. The reason I have decided that this date would be suitable is because it connotes a strong sensation of the unknown.
The most recent additions to my trailer is the footage of Flick talking to 'someone', sounding scared and my timelapse of the sunset to show time passing. My timelapse was rather awkward to edit as it is in total 8 whole minutes of footage so I had to speed it up so it looked smooth rather than jumpy. This was very difficult to do as there were gale force winds at the time of filming so unfortunately the trees kind of throw off the 'smoothness'. However, I am still happy with how the clouds came out so I decided against refilming.
Before and After Editing
This is a screen shot of my shot from zoom into my bathroom window, the lighting outside was from a yellow bulbed street light.
When I edited this shot I cut some of the blur from the end as I felt it dragged on too much. The video animation for this clip consisted of: using the 'glory' filter, which gave it the white look and took away a lot of the orange. The next process was a zoom in the centre to give it a pinched and more distorted look. I then used the trim and transform tool to enhance the zoom. Finally, I then distorted the four corners to make the clip look less boxy.
This shot was filmed through a window inside the house where most of my other footage was filmed, I used my zoom on the camera to do it and it was originally just a text shot but looked effective once I had edited it.
To achieve this final look I began by cropping down the clip as it dragged on a bit, I also altered the speed of the clip to add to the pace of my trailer. After this I added two filters to the clip to make it fit in with my house style of my trailer which were called artifacts and dream. I then again used transform and trim to enhance the zoom on the clip. Finally, I reused the distortion FourCorners to soften the clip so it didn't look too boxy and I also altered the opacity for this effect as well.
Current editing for trailer
For my trailer I have found that after a few weeks of editing, the pace of my trailer is not where I would like it to be. Not all of footage is in yet and I still have some re-filming to do, so when I have done this it will add more of a storyline to my trailer as well as making it look less repetitive. I am very pleased with how well my chosen soundtrack is editing. despite it effecting the pace however, I can introduce a more upbeat soundtrack later on in my trailer when I have found something that works well. One element of my trailer that I will focus on when filming is the continuity, so I will ensure that both of the girls will appear the same as they do in my current footage to avoid confusion of the footage being from multiple days. However, I will change their appearance for some of the filming especially when I shoot in a different location to enhance the narrative.









