Audience Research: Plot Feedback & Advice
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Current Plot
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Happy family, minus the father.
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Family: Mother, two sisters and
dog
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The family is out on a walk;
the dog comes across a box slightly buried in the leaves. He runs off from it
after sniffing.
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The younger sister picks up the
box and conceals it to bring it home.
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When home the younger sister
investigates the box and discovers a picture of the older sister.
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After this the older sister
starts to act strangely, progressing through the film.
Feedback from pitch
Issues:
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Is it going to be like every
other horror film?
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Based too much on what you have
that is available (actors/locations)
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Requires a lot of acting for
character to be unstable
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A big issue is developing it
enough for it to be scary
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Development needed on the
atmosphere
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Development needed on the
actual ‘threat’
Suggestions:
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More boxes with other pictures
of different people
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Necklace on the sisters and on
all of the people in the picture
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