All of the filming that I did on 24/10/15 was done indoors so I didn't have to worry about the weather effecting the outcome of my footage as I was in a controlled environment. This is because I could alter the lighting in whatever way I wanted. I have no issues with the overall outcome of my footage however, the fake blood that I used came out looking very luminous and unnatural so I will have to alter this in my post-production stage by adding a filter to make it appear darker. Another issue I had with the blood itself is that I discovered that it is very staining to skin, despite its purpose is meant to be for make up. Because of this I will have to rethink using it on my actors as they are young and cannot have blood stains on their skin.
This lighting I chose to use for the filming that I did was very bright and unnatural looking. However, this was due to me wanting to capture every spec of blood clearly, I can also make it appear darker if I want to rather than making it brighter in the post-production stages. I do plan to re-shoot some of the footage in a darker, more naturally lit set as it will allow me to use both options when it comes to editing my trailer together.
Plot Summary (from
IMDB)
In London, lawyer Arthur Kipps still grieves the death of
his beloved wife Stella on the delivery of their son Joseph four years ago. His
employer gives him a last chance to keep his job, and he is assigned to travel
to the remote village of Cryphin Gifford to examine the documentation of the Eel
Marsh House that belonged to the recently deceased Mrs. Drablow. Arthur
befriends Daily on the train and the man offers a ride to him to the Gifford
Arms inn. Arthur has a cold reception and the owner of the inn tells that he
did not receive the request of reservation and there is no available room. The
next morning, Arthur meets solicitor Jerome who advises him to return to
London. However, Arthur goes to the isolated manor and soon he finds that the
vengeful ghost of a woman dressed in black haunts Eel Marsh House. He also
learns that the woman lost her son drowned in the marsh and she seeks revenge,
taking the children of the scared locals.
Name of Film
The title of the film appears at the end of the trailer.
This is because the audience will watch the trailer and will be drawn in by the
film and then by showing the title at the end the audience are much more likely
to remember it than if it were showed at the beginning. The screenshot below shows there is use of a
black background and white text - which is very generic for horror films. The
black background and smoky grey adds to the sense of suspicion and horror. After the title has appeared, it is followed by the release
date of the film. This shot also includes the web address for the official
" The Woman in Black" website and the logos of the production companies
involved.
Genre
The trailer clearly indicates what the genre of the film is
from not only quick clips of the film but also from the soundtrack. The
picture, showing the haunted house, is of an establishing shot. This allows the
audience to see that it is very old and clearly abandoned. Along with the dark
lighting, broken gates and overgrown shrubbery, it connotes a dark and
mysterious atmosphere - which engages the audience. This setting is very conventional
for this horror genre, thus making it clear what the genre is. The picture of
Arthur, the protagonist, is shown alone in the fog and mud. This isolation is
another common convention of horror films as it suggests that the character is
vulnerable and there is no one else there to help him.
Sound
The music and soundtracks from the film are an important
aspect to include in the trailer as it can create the sense of fearfulness and
anxiousness. The music starts off at a slow pace. This puts the audience in a
position of waiting and wanting to find out if anything dramatic happens. It
also enables the audience to be able to hear the diegetic sound. For example,
at the beginning of the trailer, when Arthur is on the train speaking to Mr.
Daily. However, the music quickly starts
to speed up as you progress through the trailer. It becomes much more loud and
dramatic and then suddenly stops. This
therefore keeps the audience excited and apprehensive. In the trailer, for
example, the music is very mysterious and eerie as Arthur looks around in the
house. But then, as soon as he spins the zoetrope the music comes to a stop and
all you can hear is the ambient sound - Arthur's breathing and the sound coming
from the zoetrope. Then, you see a quick flash of someones face, combined with
a loud non diegetic sound which instantly scares the audiences and makes them
jump. This is a very clever technique to use because there is no build up of
sound at that point and therefore the audience weren't expecting the face to
suddenly show up and scare them.
There are also other diegetic sounds, such as; a crow
screeching, people screaming and an arm chair creakily rocking. All of which
are, again, very conventional for a horror film. The other pieces of music at
this point are tense and sudden. Along with the fast paced cuts, this quickly
makes the audience scared.
In the picture below there is face paced music which is
building up more and more until Arthur lights a match - which is then the music
comes to a stop. Then suddenly a child, covered in mud, appears. This would
scare the audience along with the loud non-diegetic sound which is played as
soon as the child is seen. Furthermore, the writing, which is made from blood,
on the nursery wall and the shot of the child from the follow shot follows the
theme of children in this sequence. This can make the audience fell
uncomfortable as children are seen as vulnerable and innocent, which can shot
the audience and also sympathise them.
Type of Shots
The trailer begins with an establishing shot. This shot
allows the audience to see a lot within the frame, such as; the train, the sky
and sun and the greenery. The shot uses ambient sound of the train along with
diegetic sound from Arthur and Mr. Daily. The non diegetic sound that is also
included is of a slow pace, creating a peaceful atmosphere.
The next shot is a close up of Arthur, resting his head on
the side of the train. This shot is used to allow the audience to see his
facial expression and his emotions. His reflection on the window suggests that
there are two sides to this character and can also convey a ghostly image,
which complements the themes in the film as it is a horror film, with ghosts
and supernatural presences.
In the bottom left hand picture there is use of a high angle
shot. This is used to show the characters vulnerability. There is also a sense
of insecurity as the house is old, abandoned, remote and haunted. Furthermore,
at this point the music changes to a more eerie and scary sound, creating
suspense for the audience.
There are then close ups following on from this. They are
used so we can see the fear and anxiety in the character. The music also gets
louder, building up to the climax. Furthermore, sometimes the camera is behind
Arthur, giving the sense that he is being followed. Along with the dark
lighting, it makes the atmosphere more sinister and frightening.
In the pictures below you can see
a wide shot of three young girls, who appear to be under a spell or haunted.
This shot allows the audience to see how defenceless these victims are because
they can't control their actions.
In the second picture below there
is a high angle shot. This highlights Arthur's vulnerability and how powerless
he is. It also shows footsteps - which is evidence of there being a
supernatural presence in the house. They also look like child footprints, which
are covered in blood. As a result, this adds to the eeriness of the film.
In the second and third picture below there is an over the
shoulder shot. Just before this shot there was a voiceover from a woman, saying
"She's always there". Suddenly there is a loud non-diegetic sound of
a ghost-like scream as soon as Arthur's hand touches the window and a face
appears on the window. This will also
scare and shock the audience.
Narrative Text/ Name
Captions
0.51s into the trailer the screen cuts to a black screen
with white text saying "THE MOST CHILLING GHOST STORY OF OUR TIME".
These few words are very simplistic but very powerful as it captures the
audiences attention. This is because, at this point, the audience have seen
almost a minutes worth of the trailer, and are captivated by it as it is
keeping them on their toes. So, by putting this text in at that moment the
audience will remember the text and will reinforce how great a film it is, thus
encouraging them to watch it. They have also kept with the theme colours -
white text on a black background, adding to the continuity. The white colour
generally connotes death and ghost which also ties in with the film's storyline
and genre. Furthermore, the wording of the text is very clever. The have made
it seem as if it is a statement and therefore a fact. This means that the
audience will believe this piece of text.
Similarly, they have also added the main actors name, Daniel
Radcliffe. Again, they have used the black background and bold white text, with
a little grey smoke effect that crosses the screen, making it seem more
ghostly. By adding in who the main actor is it can attract many of his fans.
Furthermore, by using Daniel Radcliffe, a very famous actor, it can really help
in promoting the film.
Towards the end of the trailer these three separate words (
Fear Her Curse) are shown on the screen in the space of about 5 seconds. The
first word "FEAR" is shown, followed by a clip of the film and then
the second word "HER" is quickly shown, followed by another quick
clip of the film. Then the final word "CURSE" is shown, with another
quick clip. This all happens in the space of about 5 seconds. This creates a
rapid effect, implying that the film is full of action, thus attracting the
audience. The text is, again, white on a black background. Therefore, they are
following the colour theme throughout the trailer.
Audience Feedback from 25 Word Pitch
April and Daniel:
April and Daniel:
·
Fast-paced editing
·
Flashbacks
·
Used footage
·
Clear genre
·
Slight audience hints
Becky
and Rachel:
·
Clear narrative
·
Interesting context
·
Clear genre
·
Flashbacks
·
Assumption of audience
Molly:
·
No clear narrative
·
Audience isn’t hinted at
·
Very obvious genre choice
Charlotte:
·
Shown narrative isn’t specific
·
Slight idea of target audience
·
Obvious genre choice
Kara:
·
Footage was from a similar
source so narrative development is clearer
·
Target audience is hinted at
for interpretation
·
Genre is quite clear
How I will act upon my feedback:
i will create an ideal consumer for my film trailer, along with an audience profile to ensure that my trailer is completely targeted at my specific target audience. I will also create a document explaining a detailed explanation of my FINAL idea for my film trailer so none of my ideas are lost when I begin filming and editing. I will also ensure that my idea meets with the expectations of my audience.